This gives good focus on the essentials of the article. It might be helpful to explain the content. Do you tell it like a reporter, a chronological interview, or like a story-teller, going from episode to episode? How you you decide what kinds of information is in good taste or too intimate? What do you reveal about the subject's attitude during the interview? How much to reveal or to conceal?

I made a few editorial corrections on the text especially about pronoun agreeement.