James+Jameson

UFG Proposal

UFG Annotated Bibliography

UFG Users Guide

UFG - Satiric Essay (with drafts)

UFG Reflection


 * Annotated Bibliography (5) 5 **
 * User’s Guide (10) 10 **
 * Several drafts + Final draft (15) 15 **
 * Reflection on the Process (10) 10 **

** Total(40) 40 ** ** The lesson about exaggeration you learned during peer feedback strikes me as the critical element of this genre. Satire is all about tone and the tone you set has to border on the absurd. When you refer to the deregulation of business, you sound more plausible than absurd, as your peer reviewer suggested. When you utter statements such as ** "Nothing teaches a man the value of hard work better than starvation and illness" ** then you capture the voice of Jonathan Swift and his ki n. Your final page, when you talk about forced labor camps, also captures this tone.****So I would say your essay is strongest at the beginning and end. The digression about deregulating business might be dropped altogether. You show good evidence of learning throughout the reading and writing process.**

=**Writing Portfolio**=